Grammar is ok, but lacks background information for catching the theme. Probably the passage is extracted from a story book out of context. 2011-04-29 17:46:13 補充: Apology for mistake: 'essay' not 'passage'
Grammar is ok, but lacks background information for catching the theme. Probably the passage is extracted from a story book out of context. 2011-04-29 17:46:13 補充: Apology for mistake: 'essay' not 'passage'